paozuu
Apr 20 2009, 12:22 AM
i'm confused... some lines have good rhyming yet, it's repetitive.
mipadi
Apr 20 2009, 12:03 PM
Good poetry shows -- it doesn't tell. Good poetry emphasizes imagery and the careful crafting of language to invoke a feeling or mood.
instantmusic
Apr 21 2009, 03:01 AM
ok i c wat u did dur. Touche my n*gga. Touche.