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zachyRAWR
We’re only bleeding
The lost souls rejected by a world of no remorse
Only living with a lie in our hearts
That we’re not good enough

Pathetic resistance
Held up by paper maché walls and string
Easily crumbling with a touch
And we’re not strong enough

Selecting our blindness
Hiding our precious eyes from the ‘light’ of the world
Choosing the welcome darkness
And we’re just the failures

Momentary deafness
Shielding these isolated minds from striking words
Torn between two evils
And we’re just ignorant




To live... is to be trapped by other people's beliefs and lies.
To break free from that...
To cause a death...
So easy to lay your own hand on yourself to relieve the pain that's been building up inside. The only things saving your soul are the pretty words that wrap up your life and hide your suffering.
To understand why we live...
Maybe it would justify our hurt and our bonds.
To break down...
To trap yourself in your own world where nothing can reach you...
To live in falsehoods...
To be ignorant of what surrounds you...
To let yourself free from this endless cycle...



Pure Ecstasy... If only for a moment...




Yeshh. This is the one I submitted for the Writing Contest. But since I couldn't put on the full version (it was originally a blog xD), I decided to post it again here :3
Mikeplyts
This is really nice. Great Job! biggrin.gif
zachyRAWR
Hahaha thanks xD
I wrote it when I was really really pissed at my mom.
She kept nagging me.
Telling me I wasn't doing good enough.
Soooo.
I did what I usually do.
Write it out :3
Mikeplyts
wow, that's a really healthy way to take out your anger. thumbsup.gif
zachyRAWR
If I don't get it out somewhere... harmless.
I end up doing what I did last time.
I beat someone up really badly...
With a plastic, toy sword ._."
Mikeplyts
whoa. mellow.gif
zachyRAWR
Somehow... SOMEHOW
I actually drew some blood xDDD
And it was a cheap ass sword too.
You can bend it back at forth :3
Apparently, I'm not allowed to bring any swords/knives to school anymore.
Including the plastic and toy kind.
Mikeplyts
LMAO loool.gif
zachyRAWR
All smiles and sunshine,
A perfect world on a perfect day,
Everything always works out,
I have never felt so great

At least not when I'm there xDDDD

I feel bad now.
My younger sister...
Has a crush on the guy.
Who I did that to.
._."
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