QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Jan 4 2009, 09:34 AM)

It looks cool but I think the eyes look a bit weird & not really zombie-like. It looks like someone gave her some black eyes.
I agree, except they don't look like black eyes. They look like dark holes on her head. Why not add light reflections? (Sort of like the image you first posted but more realistic.) That way, it hints that she does have eyes and at the same time, you retain the zombie/dead concept.