It is pretty good, and it's definately an improvement. The image quality is a little low, though.

Could I re-save it to make the image quality higher? I don't really know what's making the image quality so low.

Thats pretty stiffy ;D

thanks! :)

actually, i see a lot of harsh lines.
and the quality might be low because of the original images. oh and also, the top part is too light for that area. pick a less important area, like the bottom left.

ok for my next one I'll try that.

have you tried to also use the pen tool to like take out johnny in specific pics and then blend him? that can help with it instead of it looking like a bunch of pics put up and then blended.

For a first, it's pretty good. As a rule, harsh lines (i.e. edges of photos) shouldn't be seen in most blends unless they're there on purpose. I think the blue overwhelms the pictures near the top - you can do a better job making that part more transparent. Play around with different blend settings, too.

That is good for a first.

thanks! :) Do you think there are any improvements I can make to it?

Yes! Like the others said, when you blend make it to where it's hard for me to know where the picture ends and start.

You need to feather the picture at the top right corner a lot more. Also the smaller picture in the middle needs to be feather more, so there's no edges. It would look better if it was lower just a little but other than that the placement of everything is great.

That's the only thing I have to say which already been stated.

the only problem is.........I only have photofiltre. So if anyone could tell me how to "feather" on photofiltre that would be great!

I don't know anything about photofiltre but you know how you got the other pictures to fad? Do that!

In other programs such as Photoshop or Paintshop pro, feather is what makes the edges of picture fad. You put in 0 id you want hard edge or 25 or any number more than zero if you want the edges to soften.