Note
Jun 28 2004, 06:26 PM
okay, post your haikus!
a haiku is a poem with 5 syllables on the first line, 7 on the secound, and 5 on the third. and haikus are about nature.
example:
every now and then
the clouds breaks apart, showing
a lost world of blue.
::jerry::
islandkiss
Jun 29 2004, 03:14 PM
the wind blows at leaves
vunerable and fragile
falling, dead.. empty
heh. how's that?
angel-roh
Jul 7 2004, 02:33 AM
my heart gently falls apart
deep into pieces
like how the icicles break
hmm is this ok? haha dang am i sad right now?
CrackedRearView
Jul 7 2004, 02:36 AM
What a sad story...
A shunned boy who's name was
"Oh shit, here he comes".
LatinaLady
Jul 7 2004, 02:41 AM
there was a topic on haikus already.. butoh well. i have no idea how to make a haiku. i dont get it
ryfitaDF
Jul 7 2004, 03:02 AM
mathiew is a jerk
he thinks that he is so cool
he peed on the couch
one hundred bottles
of beer on the wall, one hund-
red bottles of beer
Caitlin
Jul 7 2004, 08:01 PM
my exboyfriend sucks
he lied and cheated on me
i still like him though
x hYpErRoSeY x
Jul 7 2004, 08:03 PM
aw im so sry :( get bettaz
vietspirit
Jul 7 2004, 08:25 PM
it's all because of
you. i'm feeling sad and blue.
i'm dead like a rose.
i suck rite???
pbear
Jul 8 2004, 03:27 PM
Writing my haiku,
Keeping count on my fingers,
Which means I can't type.
Aren't these supposed to-
Describe nature's majesty
Um, fingers are nice?
^^^pathetic attempts at haiku
islandkiss
Jul 9 2004, 01:14 PM
QUOTE(Idyll @ Jul 8 2004, 3:27 PM)
Writing my haiku,
Keeping count on my fingers,
Which means I can't type.
Aren't these supposed to-
Describe nature's majesty
Um, fingers are nice?
^^^pathetic attempts at haiku
heheh.. those are good
ComradeRed
Jul 9 2004, 01:21 PM
My lunar death ray
Frightens the people of Earth
Mua ha ha ha ha
imadorkabledxd
Jul 10 2004, 08:44 PM
QUOTE(ComradeRed @ Jul 9 2004, 1:21 PM)
My lunar death ray
Frightens the people of Earth
Mua ha ha ha ha
ahahahha that's funny hahahah.
Flaunted
Jul 10 2004, 08:46 PM
my room was messy.
my mom told me to clean it,
and now i am grounded.
*bows*
Foolish Heart
Jul 10 2004, 09:57 PM
Let the flower grow
There is a beauty inside
Waiting to be seen
Foolish Heart
Jul 10 2004, 09:59 PM
I won the haiku contest in my school vs. the japanese school. YAY! But, that was LOOONNGGG time ago. I don't even remember the Haiku I used.
Caitlin
Jul 10 2004, 10:07 PM
^ congrats on winning
Foolish Heart
Jul 10 2004, 10:25 PM
thankyou!
aud_chua
Jul 12 2004, 02:08 PM
the cold sharp metal
pressing against my pale skin
blood is all i see
ComradeRed
Jul 12 2004, 02:16 PM
The only problem
with Haiku is that you just
get started and then
lilambi1612
Jul 12 2004, 05:14 PM
i never heard about the sylable rule. But kno haikus aren't supose to rhyme!!!!!
Foolish Heart
Jul 13 2004, 07:53 PM
PEOPLE!! Haiku's are suppose to be about nature!! and its suppose to be deep.
Here's my Haiku:
Let the flower grow
There is a beauty inside
Waiting to be seen
It means don't just judge anybody until you get to know them.
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