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okay, post your haikus!
a haiku is a poem with 5 syllables on the first line, 7 on the secound, and 5 on the third. and haikus are about nature.

example:

every now and then
the clouds breaks apart, showing
a lost world of blue.

::jerry::
islandkiss
the wind blows at leaves
vunerable and fragile
falling, dead.. empty

heh. how's that?
angel-roh
my heart gently falls apart
deep into pieces
like how the icicles break

hmm is this ok? haha dang am i sad right now? blink.gif cry.gif
CrackedRearView
What a sad story...
A shunned boy who's name was
"Oh shit, here he comes".
LatinaLady
there was a topic on haikus already.. butoh well. i have no idea how to make a haiku. i dont get it
ryfitaDF
mathiew is a jerk
he thinks that he is so cool
he peed on the couch

one hundred bottles
of beer on the wall, one hund-
red bottles of beer
Caitlin
my exboyfriend sucks
he lied and cheated on me
i still like him though
x hYpErRoSeY x
aw im so sry :( get bettaz
vietspirit
it's all because of
you. i'm feeling sad and blue.
i'm dead like a rose.

i suck rite??? blink.gif
pbear
Writing my haiku,
Keeping count on my fingers,
Which means I can't type.

Aren't these supposed to-
Describe nature's majesty
Um, fingers are nice?

^^^pathetic attempts at haiku
islandkiss
QUOTE(Idyll @ Jul 8 2004, 3:27 PM)
Writing my haiku,
Keeping count on my fingers,
Which means I can't type.

Aren't these supposed to-
Describe nature's majesty
Um, fingers are nice?

^^^pathetic attempts at haiku

heheh.. those are good
ComradeRed
My lunar death ray
Frightens the people of Earth
Mua ha ha ha ha
imadorkabledxd
QUOTE(ComradeRed @ Jul 9 2004, 1:21 PM)
My lunar death ray
Frightens the people of Earth
Mua ha ha ha ha

ahahahha that's funny hahahah.
Flaunted
my room was messy.
my mom told me to clean it,
and now i am grounded.

*bows*
cool.gif
Foolish Heart
Let the flower grow
There is a beauty inside
Waiting to be seen
Foolish Heart
I won the haiku contest in my school vs. the japanese school. YAY! But, that was LOOONNGGG time ago. I don't even remember the Haiku I used.
Caitlin
^ congrats on winning
Foolish Heart
thankyou!
aud_chua
the cold sharp metal
pressing against my pale skin
blood is all i see
ComradeRed
The only problem
with Haiku is that you just
get started and then
lilambi1612
i never heard about the sylable rule. But kno haikus aren't supose to rhyme!!!!!
Foolish Heart
PEOPLE!! Haiku's are suppose to be about nature!! and its suppose to be deep.

Here's my Haiku:
Let the flower grow
There is a beauty inside
Waiting to be seen

It means don't just judge anybody until you get to know them.
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