Okay I'm writing a vampire story and I've only come up with one lame title.

I'll Post up the first chapter. (i've written up to 8 chapters so far) Tell me what you think PLEASE! Should I change anything? What don't you like about it. And if you can even think of a title that is okay for me to use, please let me know! Thank you!

Ok, so I didn't read all of it (it was giving me a headache), but you should think about posting it up on fictionpress.com.

^ i didn't read it, because it hurt my eyes the way
you posted it . i love to read, so please repost it (in your
cb blog or something)

oh okay thank you. Please read it and let me know what you think :)

oh okay, well i will post it in my cb blog (if i can find it.) maybe you can read it then, and tell me what you think, please?