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JRyan360

If you get a chance please check this out….
http://spiritlessons.com/
An incredible Testimony of Bill Wiese and his 23 minute trip to Hell. Bill was placed in Hell, not as a casual observer, but as someone who was not saved. He recounts all the horrid details with such precision that it captivates the listener from start to finish. If you haven't heard these testimonies, stop everything and hear them. They will permanently altered your outlook on life. My prayer life moved away from "Lord, bless me here and bless me there," to "Souls, Souls, Souls for Jesus" Jesus came to save us from unspeakable doom, and your love for Him will grow once you hear what He saved us from.

Reidar
What, do you want me to debate this? Okay.

QUOTE(JRyan360 @ Aug 7 2008, 08:13 AM) *
please check this out….


The amount of ellipsis is redundant.

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An incredible Testimony of Bill Wiese and his 23 minute trip to Hell.


This isn't an independent clause. Also, you neglected to distinguish between your own words and the passage that you wished to quote.

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If you haven't heard these testimonies, stop everything and hear them.


This is absurdly presumptive. What if I'm a neurosurgeon in the middle of operating an open-scalp procedure on a patient, and I just happen to glance at this sentence because my assistant, José, is slacking off and browsing the web, even though it's to his privilege that I brought him as an abandoned infant in a basket into my home and raised him like my own flesh and blood despite the fact that he has no legal documentation and I can just as easily deport his *** back to the Mexican slums from whence he came? And that's with knowing that I've already given him plenty of hints about getting the boot. I'm cooking with gas, you hear?! I've got a fistful of dynamite and a head full of bad intentions, yeah yeah yeah. Whuzzat? Whuzzat?

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They will permanently altered your outlook on life.


The tenses are incompatible.
coconutter
This isn't a debate? It's a statement some might not agree with, without an argument
paperplane
With only one post from the topic starter and nothing to debate, I'm going to close this.
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