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Vaguememory
I see a shadow in the mirror

Something that should've never appeared

A weakness that I cannot beat

A demon that will not leave

And when the morning comes

And I've washed away the blood

The tears from my night alone in my room

I stand up and I see the same shadow in the mirror

I cry out, I fall face forward and rip the mirror apart

Blood spilling from my hands, the gouges deep and sore

But even in the shattered remains of the mirror

The shadow remains

I cannot run away
absinthe
I like this a lot. These could be some good song lyrics in my opinion. clap.gif
Vaguememory
Thanks allot, it kinda feels a little unfinished when you say they could be some great song lyrics, I'm gonna take a look, I kinda quit real fast, cuz well, I had to do some other things, Thanks for taking your time and reading this.
Vaguememory
Okay, so here's what rolled off my mind, like a torrent. I think its good I hope whoever reads this likes it too


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I see a shadow in the mirror

Something that should’ve never appeared

A weakness that I cannot beat

A demon that will not leave

And when the morning comes

And I’ve washed away the blood

The tears from my night alone in my room

I stand up and I see the same shadow in the mirror

I cry out, I fall face forward and rip the mirror apart

Blood spilling from my hands, the gouges deep and sore

But even in the shattered remains of the mirror

The shadow remains

I cannot run away



I cannot run from something that was never a separate piece of me

I cannot run, from a shadow, forever a part of me

Delve into my soul, and I will find you there

Your devilish smile that I fell in love with,

That lovely deaths embrace is calling for me from the mirror

And it’s something I cannot escape

No matter where I try to run

It will find me







I get up and run anyway

Escaping into a moonlit getaway in my nightmare

Slipping through a meadow

Thorns from roses ripping my skin

The shadow running with me

Blood stained roses a sign of loves death

The roots rise up and grapple me

I cannot awaken from this terrible dream

No not a dream, a glimpse into my future

The pain searing through each open wound

And the stains of blood on the Earth grow cold

I cry into the night as I grip on to save my life

I never got a chance to get away



I cannot run from something that was never a separate piece of me

I cannot run, from a shadow, forever a part of me

Delve into my soul, and I will find you there

Your devilish smile that I fell in love with,

That lovely deaths embrace

It’s calling for me from the mirror

Its breath is something that I can’t escape

No matter where I try to run

It will find me





Pulling me in, cutting my skin

Is this what it feels like to die?

Love is a sin that I could never keep in

This darkness is haunting,

I’m alone in my room

Sweaty and naked, and tears in my eyes

Glass on the floor, stains on the rug

(A dream, a dream, no a nightmare)

Dreams can never hurt you,

But I woke up with scars

I thought I could escape it,

But I can never run from a piece that was never separate

I cannot hide from my shadow, for it’s entwined with my soul!

Won’t you delve into my soul, and I am for sure you’ll see yourself there

Your devilish smile that I fell in love with,

If looks could kill, I’m sure you could

Your loving beauty calling for me from the mirror;

Your breathe leading me on, I cannot run

No matter where I run

You will always find me

The shadow in the mirror

shoryuken
alll shieett.. stubborn.gif..

Vaguememory
QUOTE(PrIncEoFSeXaPpeAL @ Jul 29 2008, 10:10 AM) *
alll shieett.. stubborn.gif ..


Well whats alll shieet about it, I can't even understand what you type 3/4 of the time it looks like greek to me. laugh.gif
shoryuken
alll lookk lykee lil kidd pooeemm..
Vaguememory
Well, at least you told me something legible and understandable. Well, I'm still learning, I'm sure that I will get better as time goes on.
shoryuken
QUOTE(Vaguememory @ Jul 29 2008, 12:18 PM) *
Well, at least you told me something legible and understandable. Well, I'm still learning, I'm sure that I will get better as time goes on.

noo..

stopp talkenn n GTFOO moi facee.. stubborn.gif stubborn.gif
Vaguememory
You know, this is probably the reason why you are at a warning right? Constructive critiscism is one thing, but coming in and being a jerk about everything isn't the way to go. You think it is so cool to come on here, and Tak ike a dat fuccckken moRon
shoryuken
BEECH puhh leezz... tongue.gif

DA PRINCC dunn gitt punisshh... NUKKA im princee... DA LORDD...stubborn.gif
Vaguememory
hmmm, am I the one with Sparkly hearts?
shoryuken
watchu meen...huh.gif
Vaguememory
urm, look at ur signature Princess of sex appeal
shoryuken
HAHAH wat bout moi sig..
Vaguememory
urm, the sparkly, gay little hearts in between the picture of the asian 80's guy, and the school chick.
shoryuken
skool chik... huh.gif and wat 80 assionn guy.. huh.gif
Vaguememory
urm well your first pic where you look right out of the 80's and ur second pick where you look like a school girl. Hmmm. and you are making fun of me you little transi you.
shoryuken
da SIG aintt princc u lill fooll... stubborn.gif.. dat moi boyyfrieendd..
Vaguememory
Well, it'd been nice to know "dat fooo"
shoryuken
huh... u lykee moi boiifriendd enn moi sigg huh.. eyebrowes.gif laugh.gif
Vaguememory
No, he looks kinda goofy to me, and 1) I'm not gay 2) I'm attracted to woman (which is pretty much the same as 1)
shoryuken
damm u repplii quixx...

u no u thenkk he sexxii.. eyebrowes.gif
Vaguememory
What do you not get about not being gay? I'm a straight male, attracted to woman, not 80's wannabe transi school girls rofl1.gif
shoryuken
princ no dat.. but u thenk he cute.. _smile.gif u dun gitta b gaay da juddgee man.. u thenk moi boiifriendd ez cutee or wat.. _smile.gif
Vaguememory
>.< | I can see why someone would like him but I still think he goofy lookin.
Vaguememory
and why the f**k are we talking about this in a frum that was originaly a poem/song
shoryuken
QUOTE(Vaguememory @ Jul 29 2008, 01:30 PM) *
>.< | I can see why someone would like him but I still think he goofy lookin.

whyyy...
Vaguememory
Thank you Prince, you got a brownie point for that.
shoryuken
QUOTE(PrIncEoFSeXaPpeAL @ Jul 29 2008, 01:32 PM) *
whyyy...

u furrgott da ansurr dizz yuu..
Vaguememory
I didn't see that post, lol sorry. He just looks goofy his hair all puffy and with his glare and shit he just looks like he could be dead or at least in his 30's with how he dresses, coulda been someone who tried to bring back da 80's
shoryuken
butt u sayy u couldd see why someonee wouldd like like him.. how u see diz...
Vaguememory
Cuz I see allot of what is popular by paying attention to internet polls and other things. It's just a thing I've got in the back of my head. I'm imaginitive, I can think like other people if I want to.
shoryuken
dat got nuttin da doo withh my questtion fool.. u said u can see how someone could like like him...

is he cute... or what for someone to like like him...?
Vaguememory
I just tried to explain it to you, yeha I guess if you want to say it that way.
shoryuken
NUKKA U GAAY.... ahahahahah tongue.gif tongue.gif
Vaguememory
>.< I guess I walked right into that, but no my good sir. I am not gay. I just have a few gay friends, and they...ahem, talk to me about their fantasies. *shivers*
Eww
Gah, you're really good.

If I tried to write something like that, it'd turn out really gay and cheesy.
shoryuken
^EY EY.. nnull spammenn puhh leez... stubborn.gif
QUOTE(Vaguememory @ Jul 29 2008, 02:03 PM) *
>.< I guess I walked right into that, but no my good sir. I am not gay. I just have a few gay friends, and they...ahem, talk to me about their fantasies. *shivers*

lool... hee madd sexxii fo shoo... shifty.gif shifty.gif biggrin.gif
Vaguememory
Haha, thanks feg nut.

>.< prince >.<
shoryuken
u no moi boiifriendd ezz madd sexxyy huh.. _smile.gif...blush.gif
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