Walk a living sleep

Through a living hell

Step by step

Piece by piece

I am breaking

Love what is love

But love equals pain

Love equals sorrow

Love is a hell

That cannot speak

But can only break

And tear

And swallow our hearts whole

Fear every moment

Fear every lie

Don’t let love take you for a fool

For that is easier done

Than making love work

you've got strong emotion and must have a level of unseen deepness. you're a hell of a writer

Thanks allot =D
It's really cool hearing Compliments & even critiscism. Thanks for taking the time and reading this. =]