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LoveToMySilas
May 12th 2008, in my class, no escape
Trying to reach, trying to find, baby you are so divine.
Tell me now, do you see? You and I are meant to be.
Hard to think, hard to breathe, when you got me on a leash.
Even still, I'd never run, cause to me you're like the sun,
Shining through a stormy day, love you more than words can say.
Need your warmth, need your light, gives me strength so I can fight,
Anything in this life, when we fight its like a knife,
Plunging deep into my heart, hope we'll never drift apart,
If we do, I think I'll die, be your catcher in the rye.
- Jane Wishashan

Didn't get a chance to finish but its basically a rap I created when my Latin teacher was absent. _smile.gif Tell me what you guys think.
dispn0ygonekrazy
damn jane I like this XD
flowss niccce, can I get some rice?
it's 49,99, ooh girl you look so fine.
shine so bright, like the sun, ooh i know you are the one.

you should finish it, maybe ill hook up that guitar make a beat and you can rap it :D
LoveToMySilas
We should so tag team, muahaha. I can add my piano beats in the intro. tongue.gif

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shine so bright, like the sun, ooh i know you are the one.
Noiceeee. They learn so fast. -tear-
superstitious
Very cool, Jane. =)
Janette
Jane! That is really good. thumbsup.gif
LoveToMySilas
Thanks, guys. throb.gif That means a lot. I appreciate the feedback. Haha.
Joss-eh-lime
i really like it, tho i've never read the satcher in the rye.
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