Tears stream down her face,
She’s wide awake.
She deals with the sarcasm,
She gets put down,
She wants to love him but he gives her no support.
He’s overbearing, yes he is.

She tries to love him,
She really does.
He gets her frustrated.
She forgives him without an apology,
But she will never forget.
The scars will remain, oh yes the scars will remain.

I like it.

It's simple and straight to the point. Overall I like it.

sounds like it could be a song.

thanks for the support guys =)
earlier this week writing poems was the only way i could cope with everything.
but i'm doing better now.