So I just sat down today and wrote this quick. Just kinda flowed. Let me know what you think I guess.

Rain falls and I hear the thunder
Lightning strikes and it makes me wonder
How long can this downpour last?
Can we clear up the mess just as fast?

Downpour on my heart, oh rain
After this i wont be the same
To see you, lightning strikes in my heart
I see you and i know rain will start.

Do you see the lightning strike?
I hear the thunder, oh how they're alike
They both begin when i see you
And the rain on this pale face is nothing new.

ooh I liked that. The rhyme didn't seem forced; it really did flow very well.

only thing is that I don't really understand the last line

I like it. Did you intentionally make the last words rhyme or did they just come out that way? The rest of the poem doesn't have much assonance, which is why I ask.

Sad :[

I like that you stuck with weather elements and the way that you describe emotions using them (thunder, lightening, etc).