Starry Skies
The stars are eyes
peering on the earth below.
Watching children fall
to sleep, watching
street lamps illuminate
bustling cities.
When the sun rises,
the eyes grow weary.
Falling asleep, they disappear
not to retun
'til night is near.
The stars are eyes
protecting their sleeping children
protecting them
from the dangers of night.
- emberfly is sexy
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I like. What rhyme scheme is it?
Idk. I simple wrote it.
It was SUPPOSED to be freeverse, but since it rhymes in one place, I don't know what to tell you.
QUOTE(Steubie33 @ Apr 29 2008, 09:21 PM) 
I like. What rhyme scheme is it?
It was SUPPOSED to be freeverse, but since it rhymes in one place, I don't know what to tell you.
QUOTE(emberfly @ Apr 30 2008, 04:33 PM)
Idk. I simple wrote it.
It was SUPPOSED to be freeverse, but since it rhymes in one place, I don't know what to tell you.
It was SUPPOSED to be freeverse, but since it rhymes in one place, I don't know what to tell you.
It's freeverse still. The instance of rhyming is incidental. ;)
Nice use of imagery. =)
"- emberfly is sexy" LOL XD
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