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emberfly


Bombs bursting
children crying
the sound of guns
firing at a loved one
putting an end
to a precious life

Tears falling
blood stained streets
children's parents taken;
kidnapped by the icy
hands of death.

I sometimes ponder,
why do we destroy,
or meddle in the affairs
of strangers
from other worlds?

Why do some find it just
to relieve their brothers
of the most precious
gift of all?

Stop the madness
get out now
before our world
comes to a painful end.


// edit:

this is an assignment for my reading class. I've written 5 poems so far; this was my 5th try. I can post the other four, but only if you want. I doubt they're worth posting.
Tung
MOVED TO WRITING
superstitious
QUOTE(Tungster @ Apr 22 2008, 09:06 PM) *
MOVED TO WRITING

This isn't bad at all, by the way. I have a quick question though, did you mean "or meedle in the affairs" or "or meddle in the affairs"?

9001
I got confused
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We're from Mississippi, theres not supposed to be talent here.
emberfly
QUOTE(superstitious @ Apr 22 2008, 09:06 PM) *
This isn't bad at all, by the way. I have a quick question though, did you mean "or meedle in the affairs" or "or meddle in the affairs"?

i've never heard "meedle" before, so I guess I mean meddle? Interfere with, whichever word means that.
superstitious
QUOTE(emberfly @ Apr 22 2008, 09:14 PM) *
i've never heard "meedle" before, so I guess I mean meddle? Interfere with, whichever word means that.

Yep, meddle is the one you want to use then. =)
emberfly
oh no! I just realized I made that typo. Sorry! I changed it. sorry for the confusion.
Hedonism
Pretty Good I think.
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