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RiddleMeWonders
Pink skin
calloused hands
loving eyes,
loving anyone but your wife
what's the plan?
for when you let me go
wave goodbye or just not tell me so?
Oh i..
---I'm so tired of lovers running away.
Oh i...
---I'm so sick of the fear I know that you'll walk away
Walk away from me
Walk away from me
----- so long, so gone.
I've been left, call it...
the theft of my heart.
All those lovers who left
----They ran off with a piece of my heart.
Call it the theft of my heart.
And all, those lovers, who left,
They swept away a piece of my heart.

So tremble now; I can't get over it.
Could you survive this much hurt with a smile, could you?
You all let me down
----Can't you love me
----For more than a day?
Can't you see me in more than one way?
Do you know how badly it damages,the
frail one who manages
to keep the eyes in her gaze?
The theft of my heart
----has left me in ache.
Be-Faithful
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RiddleMeWonders
nice criticism.
shoryuken
itt cuute.. wink.gif
RiddleMeWonders
in what way?
Stefanny
So what's the title have to do with the poem?
gojira
prostitution?

in her space holiday - japanese gum
'I used to know this girl
Who gave her love away
To every guy she met
With all the games they played
She never seemed to cry
She never got upset
And one by one they came
And one by one they left'

and

'It's not like I'm a slut
Or that I really like to f**k
I just want every boy I see
To walk away with part of me
Until there's nothing left to hold
Until there's nothing left to hate
I appreciate your help
But even you can't save me from myself'
RiddleMeWonders
the answer should be apparent in the first lines..

"loving eyes,
loving anyone but your wife"

prostitution is one way of looking at it. then there's the notion of just plain being in love with a married man and FEELING like a prostitute..

Ekay
Hmm, could it just be that this girl has had multiple lovers? Not in a prostitute like way? or slut-like way. I don't know, it's not typical for girls to get played or vice versa. Not a nice world we live in. Very nice by the way.
shoryuken
gtfooo mee face.. stubborn.gif
Be-Faithful
enjoy the silence nquocasubwoofer
shoryuken
ye withh u MOM... laugh.gif
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