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JrockDollie
stubborn: I am prepared to be harshly critiqued so I am ready. I don't really want a rating out of ten but more of what you think where the error is and what I can do to fix it.

torn&broken - my webblog:
smileyamers
errors i see: the banner that u have is very nicely faded at the bottom but is harshly cut off at the top. i would try blending some of the top area to keep the image consistant. also the font and color that u use for the name of the version isn't used anywhere else and doesn't really fit in with ur color scheme. i would change it to a white or light red/orange and make it look like the way u did ur dates, again for consistency and so that title doesnt stick out so much. 1 laaast thing, haha. i don't think u noticed but on ur left module, the right and bottom borders are thinner than the rest of the borders in the entire blog. soo i would make them the same length as the other borders

happy.gif u asked to be critiqued haha. hope this helps!
JrockDollie
huh.gif Yeah, actually, those flaws I cannot fix because i don't know how to. for instance, the banner picture, the empty space above it was meant to be for the xanga ad but i moved it so now its an empty space. Also, the left mods, the trim/border format is like that, you can't fix it. i asked the person who did it.
I really appriciate the suggestions
LiLmIsSvAnDy
yeah, but all you gotta do it position your image so that it's up more. when it asks for margin-top, just put a negative number. _smile.gif The first blog header is sticking out a bit so perhaps make it shorter or move it to the left some more. Also, there is this long red line through one of your entries blink.gif and I really have no clue what that is. Oh yeah, one more thing biggrin.gif is this made on adobe photoshop? well if it is, you can edit the text so that the edges look more smooth instead of kinda... uhh I guess the word I would use is chunky or somewhat pixel-ish looking by making it crisp, strong, or sharp instead of normal. happy.gif
Winter
Only fault I see is that your image is kinda low. Like LiLmIsSvAnDy said, change your margin.
typ1cal
ur banner is nice yet simple
natsumi
I like the banner and the colors ^^~

err and the links. like at the left. ._. they seem blurry and yeaah a bit wrong looking ermm.gif
charismatic_chick
i agree with natsumi on the links and on the dates. They look wrong with your layout. Also, try positioning your layout to the center more because the right side is too blank. But other than that, i love your banner! the colors look good! i like the fact that you moved your xanga ad, a lot of layouts get ruined because of that thing! GREAT JOB! biggrin.gif
heroin_like_high
1. fonts match. good.
2. dates are horrible! they hurt my eyes, I feel like I need glasses
3. the effect on your sidebar text makes the text hard to read
4. cellpadding! you used it! ohmy.gif
5. no invisible scrollbar!
6. why is ther so much space after "Next 5"?
7. I can't really tell, but maybe, so I'm just gonna say it. I'm apologize if I'm wrong here. but, there is a brush on your angel that looks like a grid. But it looks like instead of (in photoshop) using a brush, you might have had it on pencil and "brushed" it on. maybe? cuz it should be a bit softer, right?

hope that helps. nicely done. _smile.gif
JustHere4NoReason
QUOTE(natsumi @ Jun 30 2004, 3:46 PM)
I like the banner and the colors ^^~

err and the links. like at the left. ._. they seem blurry and yeaah a bit wrong looking ermm.gif

I agree... the links look kinda grainy... I can see black speckles around the links...
xInnOcenT_BabIex
awesome header
typ1cal
isnt this in the xanga skins section?
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