Here's a poem for the guy that understands me, he's dying. I won't tell you any more private things about me. I write my poems based on my feelings, it's how I deal with my feelings. It's really hard for me to let him go.

Fading Away, by Foolish Heart [Me]

You walk in my life
Now your fading away
Heart beating so fast
Tears fill my eyes
Take my hand
Im here to help
I look at you
Blurred in confusion
Your fading away
Hold me tight
Heres my heart
Forever yours to keep
Dont forget
I'll follow you
I love you so
Just for you to know

aww im sorry to hear about the guy. but awesome poem. nicely written.

p.s: look we have similar screennames.

jackie

ahh that's cool..en thanks..i dont noe what to do anymore..i'll be on vacation startin tomoroe..en he might die [I HOPE NOT..] before i come back..omg..i am so worried..

wow... im so sorry... i really lyke ur poem... it seriously got meeh thinking about how alone i would feel and if the only person [mai boifren] who understood meeh ever left...

moved to writing.

I got one here. Its actually ment to be a song, but lyrics and poems are the same thing.

You don't know me, but I know you.
You can't see me, but I'm watching you.
You don't feel me, But I'm holding you in my arms.
You can't hear me, but I'm always listening.

I'll always be there watching your every step.
I'll be your everything when theres nothing left.
I'll be your friend, till the very end.
And all your words I defend.

You don't know me, but I know you.
You can't see me, but I'm watching you.
You don't feel me, But I'm holding you in my arms.
You can't hear me, but I'm always listening.

I'll wipe your tears when you cry,
I'll comfort u when your scarred,
I'll drive away your nightmares at night,
I'll even be there when u die.

And then you'll know me, like I know you.
Then you'll see me, as I see you.
Then you'll feel me when I hold you in my arms.
Then you'll hear me when I say, I'm your Gaurdian Angel.

I wrote it when my grandma died, and I rewrote it when my great uncle died. It makes me feel ok. I also listen to the lyrics to "into the West" It makes things better.

both poems are great.. sad too. im sorrie to hear about the guy.. hope you get to see him once more when you come back from vacation.. =]

Here's a poem I wrote
I wrote it during C Period .. I got too bored in the class:

right now, my heart lays torn apart and bleeding
inside, im just crying & dying ..
and you know what? there's only one thing i'm needing
but guess what? i've given up trying
ive given up hope, and fer all i kno
youll nevr love me, to you itz jus a joke
a joke that wasn't funny the first time around
and now wen i cry, der is no sound
kuz i've cryed my heart out ..
and even tho yer makin me wanna jz die ..
ill still love you, no doubt

Little stupid poem, but anyways .... haha xP

Here's my poem ..i was pretty sad when i wrote it..soo tell me what yah think..

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Why am I here?

Is there a reason, a reason to feel fear?

As I sit life wastes away

and all I can do is fade away...awayy..


Sometimes I feel like I don't belong

mixed thoughts and they all feel wrong

Can't i ever just feel right

and leave all this behind wthout

putting up a fight...


Speaking my last words..

I wonder if you can hear..

As tears roll down my face..

All my memories are erased



I just wish everything would be fine.

But I guess what's yours is mine


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ooh you guys have great poems..en thanks to all the people that thought mine is nice..

ohh yeah,,as far as i noe..his still alive right now..i think he's being really strong so that i'll see him when i come back..

I have a song...but it can be a poem I guess

your lovely
completely lovely in everyway
your sweet
completely sweet and everyday
I love you
I love the way
your here for me
you there for me
when I need you
your who I see

your trusting
completely trusting in all I say
your caring
you do what you can to get me my way
I love you
I love the way
your here for me
your there for me
when I need you
your who I see

when your near me I am breathless
when you kiss me I lose all sense
of everything
your here for me
your all I see
your everything
your everything

woa. talented poets! ^^ I hope everything works out for you foolish heart Anyway, Heres one of mine~>


She stumbled as she walked along
a wrinkle graced her jaunty brow
the heavens fell, cast downward when
a hand exposed the path she found

She longed for warmth, ensnarled by frost
across horizons arms that fled
persistance of a heart that weeped
to walk the road that so few tread

with fleeting eyes that seemed to scream
she stood admist the lashing air
wispy tendrils masked her face
her fingers laced in longing prayer

and when she fell, I knew not why
her hands perturbed with death had slain
freedom came, redemption none
and only tears fell free from pain.

-Teressa

nice poems

haha i thot this was made by jackie ono! HAHAHA!! lols same sn huh? haha newais awww someone's dying and u made it for that person? awww thats so sad T_T but i think thats cute to give ur heart to him even tho he dies T_T

whos jackie!!?? ahh, well thanks.