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ryfitaDF
just a little somthin i threw together to not get rusty.

Have you ever been…
To a plane no one has seen…
Where the sky is crimson night…
And the sun doth propel light…
Where you cannot stand…
With frozen egg timer sand…
Where the demon stares you down…
And the stars have all burnt out…

Midnight witches sing their songs
Fiends scavenge all night long
For a virgin soul
One to rape and fudge as an addition to the toll

I call this place…

And the sirens sound…
For the fall of a guard once known for being profound…
And the creatures stir…
In their content: beyond flesh or fur…
As the moonlight pleas…
The atmosphere of here will drive you to your knees…
From the long dead hope…
Dream of salvation in the hangman’s rope!

Midnight witches sing their song
As fiends scavenge all night long
For a flower bright for their sordid seed infest
One to vandalize and spoil to their heart’s content

I call this place…

(solo)

Where we exchange our souls for dope
Because on centuries we’ve forgotten how to cope
And a place to claim the life of innocence
Where we still believe when someone says “god bless”

I call this place HOME!
I call this place HOME!
You call this place HELL!
I call this place HOME!
Winter
*clap clap* Just hows how people have conflicting ideas.
jz1134
oo i liked it gj happy.gif
Mini
gg! haha...nice. that could be a song ! ^^ happy.gif
d3v1l1ci0us
lovely =]]]]]
_WillSkate4Shoes
QUOTE(Mini @ Jun 26 2004, 12:12 PM)
gg! haha...nice. that could be a song ! ^^ happy.gif

Agreed that should be a song!=D
v0lc0mbAbE13
wow!! that's frickin awesome dude!! do you have a band or something? because that seriously is a hit... because so many people can relate to it. again, awesome job!! <33
Luster Soldier
That is just amazing....wow.....it should be a song :D Really, as beautiful as COF lyrics :D
ryfitaDF
QUOTE(Luster Soldier @ Jun 27 2004, 10:12 PM)
That is just amazing....wow.....it should be a song :D Really, as beautiful as COF lyrics :D

hehe. i actually put "sleepless" on repeat while writing that.
angel-roh
wow lunchbox! u did truly an amazing writing there! the lyrics sounds awesome!! lols ^___^ millions stars for u! wow u wud be a great singer! i just prayed for u like a while ago. i told God that u will be the perfect singer in the band cause of making good lyrics! _smile.gif
ryfitaDF
aaw thanks!

but see their's the part of the song "Where we still believe when someone says “god bless”"

i don't think god would want me to sing that. hehe
kyuubi319
wowsorzs... thats madd good... *clapsorsz* worthy.gif
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