Well, it was a c4d attempt, one of which I made several changes to.
Anyone mind telling me if it was a decent attempt or not?
I also made a much larger one, with a different photo, but I'm not quite sure if I like it.
Anyways, feel free to critique it as much as you feel necessary, and then more.
Thanks.

I think this would be much better if it was in the showcase, that way you can obtain more critique.

It looks neat, the glowing effect is pretty cool. The only thing that I don't like is the font placement and the font type. It's hardly noticeable.

Moved to Showcase.

because of its size, i can't really see the details. it also looks kinda blurry that small. mind posting the larger one?

I agree; it would help to see the larger version, if there is one. But based on the size it's currently in, it does look pretty tight. I'm just not fond of the text placement either.

The attached image was the 2nd c4d attempt, and a while afterwards.
I'll admit, I like the first one better, but eh.
Enjoy.


Edit: Sorry, attached now.