**name that gives poem away goes here***


every now and then i resort to the old pictures

piled away atop dusty shelves.

i know your face is out of reach

with every step closer i take

i can see straight through you

my mind still wonders at your name

you never knew i felt this way

you know i cant take a broken heart

you knew i couldnt have been in love with you..

you never gave me my chance

you saw straight through my heart

that other girl

that other love

your only hope

my only hate

the thought of your pain

the thought of losing what was never mine

i cant stand your happiness

your tears kill me

your voice.. your voice

i am not in love

i am not in love

i am not in love

you cant care for me

i cant love you

why does my heart deny me

why cant i speak the truth

i love you

so please dont walk away

i care for you

your raggety old photos

ill put them away

my shy smile disguised

you never knew i cared

i cared
please dont laugh

I would anyone laugh? That was heart breaking. So like me...

very good c u posted on my poem not so much rhyming but really i think i counted only like 4 rhymes ur poem is alot better than mine tho so mayb i should take ur advice

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its a good poem except it doesnt have much rhythm

good job again

nice repetition.

great job.. i really relate to the poem <3
keep up the good work

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Awesome. I can relate to it a lot.