Bleeding From the inside
Inside I'm bleeding
Inside im dying
I'm shutting down
and im sick of trying
these bloody tears
full of all my fears
disappear
You locked me in a tiny box
and stabbed me with the key
Why do you confuse my smile with happiness?
I'm drowning in darkness
Just let me bleed
from the inside i spill
and this pain is starting to kill
these wounds arent healing
im loosing all feeling
lost in the darkness
bleeding from the inside
-Fin-
dont laugh at me..most of my poems are songs i wrote only without the music

thats really good... but try not to focus so hard on rhyming. you can express truer feelings without that hassle...

but still. very, very good.

Ah I can relate. I think it's quite good.

das reallie good.. =] itz very deep

thats really good, i really liked it!

imnot gonna laugh i like it those are good. i feel likethat. i cant relate to it and thats how i liek it more then the others here in cB