forever-without-you
Oct 8 2007, 11:40 AM
brooklyneast05
Oct 8 2007, 12:53 PM
if u think it sucks why are u going to make a layout out of it?
jammylise
Oct 8 2007, 12:55 PM
YO ma i don't like it that much..
It's mad big yo...
But if you don't like it then make a new one.......
RAWRstephishere
Oct 8 2007, 01:03 PM
QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ Oct 8 2007, 12:53 PM)

if u think it sucks why are u going to make a layout out of it?
Word.
IVIike
Oct 8 2007, 02:52 PM
It's ok... thats your style so go with it
forever-without-you
Oct 8 2007, 03:19 PM
the reason why I asked is because sometimes the things I hate the most.... other people like most....if that makes sense...
doiink
Oct 8 2007, 03:21 PM
I actually like the text in the back, but I'm not too into the blood/paint spatters
freeflow
Oct 8 2007, 07:45 PM
I think its overdone. There is too much text and stuff and its just out there. Its too much in my opinion.
AimeeLynn
Oct 8 2007, 09:55 PM
That looks depressing...but I believe in mike on what he said. If it your style go for it.
Insurmountable
Oct 8 2007, 11:22 PM
I don't like it...I've never liked layouts like this. its overdone, too much text takes away from it.
SinfullySweet
Oct 8 2007, 11:42 PM
Its definitely overdone. There is way too much text. It makes the layout seem cluttered and messy. The arrangement has no focal point. I think you're trying to hard for a particular look.
Try not using the same methods over and over again, try new things.
ipetpandas
Oct 9 2007, 12:01 AM
It's ugly. :[
It's too emo... ew.
ChadDevil
Oct 9 2007, 12:04 AM
i dont like it
Relentless
Oct 9 2007, 12:16 AM
It's sort of bleh? I think this shows no creativity whatsoever in graphic design for making layouts. I mean literally, text all over it? Not really a "good/great layout". The positioning of text is good use in graphic design but having the layout all text, is kind of blah. It shows no potential whatsoever.
natalieferrol
Oct 22 2007, 07:23 AM
you guys are some harsh critics!
i understand why someone might hate something but want an opinion.
sometimes you're your worst critic.
i'm not a fan. the colours are far too emo and it looks cluttered.
but it depends on what you were going for. and if you like it...eff it!
freeflow
Oct 22 2007, 07:32 AM
When people post here asking for feedback and opinions we give it. If they can't handle the responses they don't need to post here. Its posted here to get critique and we don't have to sugar coat our responses.
natalieferrol
Oct 22 2007, 07:44 AM
hmm ok i correct my statement
"you guys are some harsh critics lol!"
was just an observation. nothing to take too seriously love!
freeflow
Oct 22 2007, 07:49 AM
Oh don't worry I can careless . I was just stating because the people here are pretty laid back (most times) when it comes to criticizing someone's work. People may not feel like it but they are.
clarity
Oct 22 2007, 08:51 PM
It's too busy. Try not using too many different fonts, it plays with the mind!
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