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shortie09
i didn't write this. i found it on a friend's xanga. hope it hasn't already been posted; if it has, i'll post something else..



boy_ I saw her today
girl_ I saw him today

boy_ It seems like its been forever
girl_ I wonder if he still cares

boy_ She looks better than before
girl_ I couldn't help staring at him

boy_ I asked her how things were going
girl_ I asked about his new girlfriend

boy_ I'd choose her over any girl I'm with
girl_ He's probably really happy now

boy_ I couldn't look at her without starting to cry
girl_ He couldn't even look at me

boy_ I told her I missed her
girl_ He doesn't miss me

boy_ I meant it
girl_ He didn't mean it

boy_ I love her
girl_ He loves his new girlfriend

boy_ I held her for the last time
girl_ He gave me a friendly hug

boy_ Then I went home and cried
girl_ Then I went home and cried

boy_ I lost her
girl_ I love him....
NgocQuyen
omigosh!!awwhss...*tear* x_x if only he felt that way....
Kathleen
Wow...that sounds so familiar. Ahh memories. pinch.gif
CoLd_FlAmE
sad...
lozerface87
...thats depressing
shortie09
yep..imagine, things would be better if we told the truth and didn't let fears of rejection, etc. get in the way. ehh.. mellow.gif i should practice what i preach.
Winter
Waahhh brings back the memories. This depresses me. cry.gif
ryfitaDF
aaw man. that's a real thought provoker. can i write a song inspired by it?
shortie09
QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Jun 21 2004, 2:24 AM)
aaw man. that's a real thought provoker. can i write a song inspired by it?

sure. happy.gif i didn't write it; i lack the creativity to. i've read some of your poems in writing and wow..you're really skilled. i enjoy reading your writing, as well as kathleens. oh the envy...
ComradeRed
What we have here is a failure to communicate!
× JeNi ×
awww i read dis one before.. =/ i got teary-eyed xP it`s so sweet tho..
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