hybrid
Jun 16 2004, 03:07 PM
Its a very very good story.

Its really good. I hope you guys find this.. and read it. It made me cry. This is very brilliant!
Brown Eyes
Kathleen
Jun 17 2004, 12:58 PM
Oh my gosh. That is sad. It didn't make me cry, but still...it's a good story. You know what, it seemed like my life was going to be similar until high school and stupid pot head friends got to him.
Yemmerz
Jun 17 2004, 01:12 PM
Aww that put a tear to my eye...man some people can write some powerful stuff.
Winter
Jun 19 2004, 03:48 AM
That's so sad... She has so much hope. Perhaps it is people like this that get the happy endings...
juliar
Jun 19 2004, 11:24 AM
It's not a movie...things always turn out right in movies...
=(
hybrid
Jun 21 2004, 12:10 AM

Guys..there's 10 chapters by the way!
It's on the top righthand corner!
defjam_gangsta
Jul 20 2004, 09:30 PM
Greetings!!
OMG!! i almost cried while reading thru it. it just filled me in. call me a SNAG but tat's a beautiful piece. THUMBS UP!!
CHEERS CB!!
dani41790
Jul 20 2004, 09:55 PM
man that story is realli sad. didnt make me cry since i've heard even sadder stories. whoever wrote that story is a good writer. i realli like the happi ending
ichiban
Jul 20 2004, 10:14 PM
I cried so hard ..

especially when at the end when she was tellin him her feelings for him ....
bibliomania
Jul 21 2004, 02:40 PM
Read it and loved it. Oh my gosh, I think I'm going to cry again...
ichiban
Jul 21 2004, 04:10 PM
i read it AGAIN!! lol ... love the story xP
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