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temporary-insanity-xo
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ANG33ZY
nice. i like.
LadyXTor
aww! I love it!
stormbringer
You tell me that it’s over, I guess it’s for the best.
It only hurts me when Im sober, I never would’ve guessed
That I’d miss what we could’ve been and what I’ve never really had.
Now all I can do is sit and watch, the Good in life go bad.
I miss what you were to me and the way you made me feel
But after all that’s been ,said and done, I don’t think it was real.
You dropped me in a minute, It didn’t take very long.
I think of what you’ve put me through, and know I can move on.



I added some punctuation thingies..

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Good in life go bad


I didnt really get this one the first time I read it, so I suggest something to clarify the meaning of good in this.

thats really sad :[
sourire
I like it. You keep a nice beat throughout the poem.
dispn0ygonekrazy
pretty koo, I use to write stuff like this a lot, I still do lol but not as much. reminds me of my old stuff. good job keep it up
pinacoolada
It's not cheesy XD
Nice job. =]
xFaith
That's really nice =) I like it alot^^
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