sourire
Jul 29 2007, 11:26 PM
Take this oath
And meet me under
The cold white tree
Where we can grow old
Together again
We'll take it's warmth
And blow out the lights
Make sure we're climbing down
To make it all right
I'll take the leap
If you're there to catch me
And you can bet I'll miss
Face down, but still standing
Together we can run amok
YourSuperior
Jul 30 2007, 10:46 PM
I think of a couple and a tree house for some reason when I read this. I think it's beautiful, personally.
superstitious
Aug 2 2007, 07:27 PM
That's sweet. Short, simple and playful. It's definitely a smiler poem. =)
Moderator
Aug 8 2007, 11:26 AM
That was really sweet. Something I would give to my loved one to tell them I want to spend the rest of my time with them.

great job.
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