Has the air gotten warmer
Maybe I’m just choking
And you can’t stay a minute
By my side

If the pressure is building
I must be rising
I can see you through construction
Constructing me constructing you
Well there were moments I believed
Hoped you could read my mind
Cause everything inside me held you

Closer I thought if I broke these walls
With smiles the windows fell
Kept true to themselves and locked me out
Away from you

Has there been a misconception in the blueprints
And I’m imprinting you in me
Oh the clouds couldn’t resist the pressure
Pouring down in support
Clap everybody my thunder
My breaking point near tonight
Under damp weather I saw you

Closer I thought if I broke these walls
With smiles the windows fell
Kept true to themselves and locked me out
Away from you

And I hoped that you could read my mind
So you’d know to turn around to see me in time

I’m holding up I’m feeling light
With me it’s never right but I saw you





* I apologize for the last post which consisted of "[".
I've been going through some crap and erased everything I wrote due to it. But thanks guys, for understanding.

Wow. That's really well written

The ending felt a little abrupt to me.

It didn't seem as great as the beginning, but overall I really liked it. Good job!

Agreed with the others. ^_^

Nice poem, very niiiice. LOL