i hear your voice
but not the words
what is this you say?

i hear my heart
ripped in two
why will not you stay?

what did i do
to deserve it
to end this way?

your words hurt
and you don't care
please just go away.

and leave me to my pain.



short. more spur of the moment. impromptu. but, inspired by experience.

It's short, simple and to the point. But I like it coz it relates to me a lot.

I like this one. For surely it can relate to a lot of people. Cool.

Hehe very true - short and down to the point. Very nice.

i can relate to this poem! its great!