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JustAnotherTeenageLoser
Working on this one for my art class. I think I'm gonna change the background, it looks weird :x The face is kinda ehh but oh well. I got the picture of the ballerina from a drawing book


Hmm did this one real quick when I was bored & flipping through a magazine & came across this in an ad haha. Thought it would be a fun one, with the odd angle/position the woman is in :]



Yeahh, I'm drawing a portrait of my friend during our 15min reading periods at school haha. Obviously, it isn't quite finished yet...I haven't had much time to work on it.


I'll update if I make any more prgress on the first & last ones
C&C appreciated happy.gif
Please, attack them, I need it pinch.gif
mishyerr
They're good overall, but you should work on the smoothness of your gradation. I can see a lot of stroke-marks. I love the first one.
sprezzatura
The first one is really well done.
The second one...I don't know what's with her arm, but that curvy line looks weird and should be more blended in by shading. Oh, and I suggest you make the hair look smoother and more natural.
I couldn't comment on the third one because you are not done with it.
misoshiru
I'm just amazed that you finished that much on the last one in 15 minutes.
JustAnotherTeenageLoser
Thanks guys happy.gif

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you should work on the smoothness of your gradation. I can see a lot of stroke-marks.

Hm..yeah, I see that now...thanks!

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I don't know what's with her arm, but that curvy line looks weird and should be more blended in by shading.

Yeah...that was a little curl of hair...I guess it doesn't quite look right, hm? I'll fix it.

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I'm just amazed that you finished that much on the last one in 15 minutes.

Oh! Heh, no, it's 15 min per day. That was in about four or five 15min periods :x So about an hour or so total
deplorable
i dont mean to be a spoil sport.... but i was in wizard art shop yersterday and saw a drawing with pencil book with the EXACT same ballerina on the cover as the one in your 1st drawing. if your gonna copy , give credit to the original artist.
JustAnotherTeenageLoser
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i dont mean to be a spoil sport.... but i was in wizard art shop yersterday and saw a drawing with pencil book with the EXACT same ballerina on the cover as the one in your 1st drawing. if your gonna copy , give credit to the original artist.

Agh, I thought I had put the credit in there...crap, sorry, I did give credit when I was posting it on another site at the same time, must've forgotten on this one. pinch.gif Thanks for pointing that out
Jeng
First and second=awesome, the nose on the second is weird, but it's still ahmahzingg
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