here's a little something i wrote to ease the pain. forgive me, im not really a writer. =(
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What have I done
Oh what have I done?
I tore my heart into two
Now all I can do it watch
Watch it bleed
Watch it bleed
May my blood cleanse me
And free me from this nothingness
Full Version: ive done something terrible today!
Not bad.
I've seen a lot worse coming from some that actually do write frequently.
Short, gets right to it, and I'm sure a lot of people can understand and/or empathize exactly what it is you're expressing in this poem.
I've seen a lot worse coming from some that actually do write frequently.
Short, gets right to it, and I'm sure a lot of people can understand and/or empathize exactly what it is you're expressing in this poem.
^^
Agreed. It's simple and easy to relate to and understand. I like it.
Agreed. It's simple and easy to relate to and understand. I like it.
Awww. *Hugs Jusun* 
It's good, though.
It's good, though.
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