Ugh, I misspelled "twilight" in the topic title.
Another short poem:

Twilight Falls

It was pouring emotion
on a twilight of false insanity
with glass lust painted
on the abyss for a sky.
Engulfed, the shadow of black autumn
knelt for ungiven defeat.

I like it=]
but i think it needs alittle more detail, and lines.
but overall i like it.
well done.