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Depression

Depression
Just One More
Subliminal Suggestion
Before the Suicidal Tendencies
That Won't Let Us Be
Just Lets Us Bleed
Just to see us
Cry
Eyes bloodshot red
With the gun to our head
Just to chicken out
And be Depressed again


Comment and Crit Please?
KissMe2408
hm, i like it a lot actually.

and these lines here:

QUOTE
Eyes bloodshot red
With the gun to our head
Just to chicken out
And be Depressed again


nice way to end it.
mmhmichelle
but but it's too depressing :[
Kontroll
cry.gif Wow, I feel like killing myself. Or just punching the person who wrote this.
deletethisplease
lolz,
yay for me =]
wildncrazyath3rt
i like it.=] have nothing really to say bad about it
QUOTE
That Won't Let Us Be
Just Lets Us Bleed
Just to see us
Cry
Eyes bloodshot red
With the gun to our head

I liked that part.. lol its most of it blink.gif
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