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poetwritremokid
The light shining on me
Not stoping as we speak
Its never going to be gone
Loudness and high
Pitchey would never describe it
It expresses emotion
People stop and liste
They wonder where it is comming from
Its my voice
Singing the truth about how I am
Its bright and colorful
Just like the world around us

While musical instruments play
My heart beats to the music
Dancing and being happy
People joining with me to express
The shadows go away and all the pain
It all dissapears
Freedom
Happiness
Comfort
ITS THE END OF MY DARKNESS
brundleswat
Nice. Good job. It needs a little touch up on typos but it is nice.
iloveyou1223
better than the other one
poetwritremokid
lol well today was a good day....:]
idk for some reason i felt like so happy....weird....lol and i know i can't spell for my life LMFAO
Uronacid
QUOTE(*.brokendoll.* @ Feb 27 2007, 7:13 PM) *
lol well today was a good day....:]
idk for some reason i felt like so happy....weird....lol and i know i can't spell for my life LMFAO


Well that's good, learn to love life... :]
poetwritremokid
yes it is...but yet the obstacles suck...lol jk jk


<3
turntabletux
QUOTE
yes it is...but yet the obstacles suck...lol jk jk


<3


I still am looking for the guide book to life whistling.gif
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