this is one of my favorite poems that Ive written..I usually dont like the poems that I write lol..

A bow to strings on my violin is like pen to my paper...
When I stroke so beautifully,
Words come from the pleasant sounds of my instrument...
I create love, hate, anger by one note..as if I wrote a thousand poems...
I see and hear the world around me and I wonder how I could bless them with with a song...
A song of poems...
My violin is my shelter from the cold streets on which I live...
My human hands have formed into the soft, musically inclined hands of which I play so softly for my soul to go to sleep...
I forever remain a young, aspiring violinst..
I forever remain one of the most talented young poets alive...
I forever remain...Musically Poetic....

Typo? It's good -- the concept reminded me of the one essay I wrote for USC. Mrrm. *Decides to post it* Well, not the music idea -- the idea of the power of language.

lol I just caught ut..I edited it though.

Thanks

^It has not been edited.

I can relate to this very well, since I am a violinist myself. The ending is the best part though I wish there were more to the poem. It's too short!

This is a really beautiful poem! I love your message and syntax. However, it would be nice if you constructed it without the ellipses (...). I think that would give the poem much more impact.