I don't have the opportunity as everyone else does? I strive to do so much for you, but you don't seem to realize it do you. These words that I speak, they aren't just words. These are my very heart and soul spilling out trying to express that this isn't just a desire. It's a need. A craving. A necessity. Notice me. Look at me. I try, I really do to get over you, but I've accepted you, now you need to accept me. Embrace me. Love me. Take me. As long as it's about you and me, I don't really care.

interesting piece. only thing that bugged me was that there should've been a question mark at the end of the first sentence, but then again i'm nitpicky so don't pay much attention to that. but good job though

^ agreed, it's lovely

its well written.
but yeah some ends would need " ?"
bc there are some questions.
but nice poem. i kinda relate to it=]
well done.