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BeautyInATragedy
It's not that you're entitled,
It's not that you should choose.
I know that you are stranded,
So I will let you loose.
But will you leave me hanging?
Once I let you go.
Or will you be here standing?
Even with our scars below.

Eh, simple and straightforward is not really my style. But I really liked this one.
jayen
For something so simple and straightforward, it was really good. happy.gif
Ekay
i agree with jayen. but i'll say this, never underestimate the impact simplicity has on people. sometimes simplicity is all it needs
MrStrife
^ I second that. Short and Sweet.
jayen
QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Feb 4 2007, 10:14 AM) *
i agree with jayen. but i'll say this, never underestimate the impact simplicity has on people. sometimes simplicity is all it needs




That's good; somtimes simplicity really is all people need.
BeautyInATragedy
Thanks guys! Some people understand things better when its simple, that's why I think people can relate better to simple things.
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