Ekay
Jan 30 2007, 02:07 AM
Comlication arisen from situations
Situations that have been caused by nothing but frustrations
Frustrations formed by naivety
Naivety brought about by anxiety
Anxiety brings about nothing but fear
And with it, happiness begins to fade and disappear
Loss of happiness is loss of self
Store happiness on the shelf
Never lose it or misplace it
Complications may arise,
But that's no reason for happiness to be at a demise
Laughsalot
Jan 30 2007, 08:16 AM
wow this is actually really good. nothing to emo. and not so long. i love it.
S0ul_Reaper
Jan 30 2007, 08:48 AM
As expected of you, Good job/ I liked how contrasted between fear, anxiety and happiness.
Ekay
Jan 30 2007, 06:39 PM
thanks :D
mono_logue
Jan 30 2007, 10:31 PM
i liked how you put it into a rhyme scheme.
MrStrife
Jan 31 2007, 12:55 PM
I like it. It got me thinking of a whole new perspective on life. Honest because I been depressed for a while now.
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