morning is dripping,
falling into afternoon like coagulated paint.

the day no longer fluid,
it stumbles farther out of reach.

eyes see reflected emptyness
search upward in question
and open to answers.

swimming, sweeping light in the flood
of a cool starry night
my heaven sighs to say:
your love is like a flash light
you turn it on and off when you want
seeking something earth can not supply
and forget about it when you're "alright"

what does coagulated mean?

clumpy. think of it like when you're scrambling eggs.

It's good.

This is my favourite I've read in the forums! It's so meaningful and delicate. "Your love is like a flash light" is my favourite line. I don't have anything to add except to ask if your grammar is meant for impact or is just random?

What do you mean?