you were there when i needed you
i was there when you needed me
does this mean our love is true?
or are we not meant to be

Listen to your heart
please pay attention
i dont want to be apart
those words i will not mention

but to you i give my love
and to you i say please stay
you see god sent you from up above
awaiting for this day

so if you want to let this be
i can let you go
i guess there never was a -we-
and i guess i'll never know


what do you think? i suppose it kind of sounds corny to me now because i wrote this when i was ummmm 11 and that was about 6 years ago..

Hmm... well, I must say that for a poem written by a persona that was 11 years old at its creation, it's quite good.

The rhyming was a bit typical of the normal teenage love/angst poems, but I take into account the age of the speaker.

Overall, I think it's okay.