c&c please. I need suggestions. It will be a layout for a friend so I need as much help as I can get.

I like it, the font is ok, but maybe put it below or make it more "readable". But I really think its good now.

Whoa, that's pretty cool! The colors look great together. I do agree with Toya, though. I'd change the font and move the position so that you can see it better.

^ I tried that, and wherever i put it it looked so out of place. I just decided to leave it there.

Perhaps you could outline your text?

I'd try putting it under the drum on the left.

JESS MUAHAH I SAW THIS BEFORE ANY OF YOU. JK. ANYways. I said I liek it as it is. Hehe, I like the colors and images, and everything.

It's an awesome image, but is that the full size? I wish it was bigger so I could see more detail, but it looks good as is. Does stroking the text make it look better? But great font and positioning choice.

Your avatar made me laugh out loud.

Anyways, it looks great, I agree with everyone about the font. You should definitely add an outline around it.
Other than that, I love it.