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akjsd
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synthase
i really like the first one
and the scene in the second one is really pretty
& i really like how you made reflections in the water too
Simba
I like the composition on these. I think I like the first one better. The second one has a nice mood to it though.

Well done, overall. thumbsup.gif
Jeng
OMG. HOW'D YOU MAKE THOSE, YOU HAVE LIK KLDFGJSDKLFJS TALENT! I'm so jealous, omg people look at this work, you are going to become famous because of your work. OMG.OOGMGOMG
Intercourse.
The first one looks better, hands down. I like the second one the best though, because theres more to look at it and the mood towards it is very nice.
Duchess of Dork
QUOTE(Jeng @ Jan 18 2007, 5:33 PM) *
OMG. HOW'D YOU MAKE THOSE, YOU HAVE LIK KLDFGJSDKLFJS TALENT!
OMG.OOGMGOMG

What she said laugh.gif

These are amazing. I love the first one, the detail, mood, everything! WOW
Uronacid
The first is much better, but I like them both... ;]
Gypsy Eyes
I'm not sure if it's the scan/picture but the first one should be a little sharper. Try to blend the reflection into the water a bit more on the second one.

Other than that they're beautiful. The mood is set very well.
akjsd
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mona lisa
Wow, they are truly beautiful. Completely tranquil and serene indeed. throb.gif
sprezzatura
Oooh. They are beautiful.

I like the first one more, but the second one would be better if you shade some more on the water.
bijoue
i am quite jealous. i can't do oil paintings. i'm an ink pen person.
freeridefight
Wow, your really talented. happy.gif Second one is my favorite.
mishyerr
I think your pieces would be way better (not that they aren't already great) if you added more texture and sparkle to the water. Or maybe it's just me; I love to pile up the oil-paint when I'm doing water-scape things.
slipper
the first one should definately be in your portfolio. it tells a beautiful story.
KissMe2408
UHM. WOW.

These are really amazing actually.
Def enter these into your portfolio.
IF you have to choose between the two, then choose the first one.
The composition is more interesting, and there seems to be more
of a story behind it. The color is amazing as well.

Gosh, ur talented girl.
iDecay
Wow, I love these. I think they look great. thumbsup.gif I really like the flowers. XD.gif
StanleyThePanda
I know I am kind of late but.... WOW. These are gorgeous. *envious of your talent* heh.
I really like them both, Amazing job. thumbsup.gif
xtrancie
this remind me of vietnam x] my sister used to wear those dress and made me wear them Lmao, never work -____-
oI love it <3
multifaceted
They are both awesome. I love the flowers and the detail.

In the first one, (and I think you know this already) the second person in white is a bit distorted. A technique is to paint the foreground and the lighter colors first, then paint the background and the darker colors.

The second one is my favorite out of the two, though I think it could be a little better. The reflection on the right side, reflecting the trees, the trunks should be slightly reflected as well.

Besides those things, it is a great piece. Call me when you sell it. I want it. _smile.gif
oXMuhNirvanaXo
I really like them both. You did a wonderfull job. I love all the colors.

o_O
cute_poison
wow ur really good i love the second one.
Blaqheartedstar
i like the first one, but the refelection in the water on the 2nd one is amazing, both are lovely pieces
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