There you are holding onto love
With a jubilant smile that washed it all away
Crying softly in the midst of all the misery
You were cradled by the past
Gazing so softly among the stars
They glisten only for you

Now here you are walking a blind path
Abandoning guidance with its concern
Painting your own picture of the world
Its heavens surrounding you with light
Radiant and affluent
Emulating the celestial sanctuary you've left

Such a brave girl
Such a naiive girl
Letting ignorance follow her road
Entangled in the oblivion of nothingness
She became the past's silhouette
The future's reaper

What a dismal sound
A horrifying cry
Locked in the somber cage of death


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if you don't get it, basically it depicts the life of a woman. Growing up, blissfully aware, until bam, there goes reality.

Pretty good, I like the idea of it.

nice! i like the idea behind it.

Oh wow, I liked it a lot. I love poems written like this. Also, I can relate with your subject.