Help - Search - Members - Calendar
Full Version: Huellas de Concreto
Forums > Community Center > Academia > Writing
elaboratedream
Huellas de Concreto

Huellos de concreto
Restante para todos ver
Para comparar quien somos
Y quien debemos ser
Uno serie de huellas
Para guiar un mundo de problemas
Uno serie de huellas
Para comparar que hacemos
Y que podemos

Siguiente estas huellas de piedras
Frío, duro, y con no amor
Impersonal y ignorante
Ellos siguen con no pensamiento

Y cuando ellos ven
Que esto concreto es
La cazada del infierno
¿Quién fue culpable?
Cuando los almos de ellos fueron vendía
¿De quién son los huellas
Que guiaron muchos mal?
Las huellas guiaron muchos
Para ir en la ruta mal


english version:

Concrete Footprints

concrete footprints left for all to see
to compare who we are
to who we were meant to be

one set of footprints
to guide a troubled world
one set of footprints
to compare what we do to what we could

following these steps of stone
so cold, hard and unloving
impersonal and ignorant
they mindlessly follow the road

and when they see that this concrete
is none other than the highway to hell
whose fault is it
that their souls they did sell
whose footprints are these
that led so many astray
whose footprints have led so many
to go the wrong way
KissMe2408
Hm, I really like this. Very interesting, I like the whole footprints theme.
Especially the last few lines . . .

"whose footprints are these that led so many astray
Whose footprints have led so many to go the wrong way."

I like it, great job.

Ah, and interesting reading it in Spanish as well. lol
This is a "lo-fi" version of our main content. To view the full version with more information, formatting and images, please click here.