staticpose
Aug 8 2006, 02:16 PM
this one is a little better. i added a texture, and this was actually my first time
using and texture :P. and i added a little bit of brushes
emmy rossumi'm actually quite satisfied
x_curse_of_the_curves_x
Aug 8 2006, 02:19 PM
aww its cute!! really good i think but i dont know much lol!!
aeroplane.
Aug 8 2006, 05:29 PM
It looks like you used a grungy texture for this. Maybe try a light simple texture. The font to me looks a bit tacky. Try to cut out your images a bit smoother so they don't look choppy. But I must say you really improved from the last one. Nice job.
Jeng
Aug 8 2006, 07:00 PM
try adding more images, and overlapping most of them,change someof their angles too, but looks good
freeflow
Aug 8 2006, 07:24 PM
QUOTE(aeroplane. @ Aug 8 2006, 3:29 PM)

It looks like you used a grungy texture for this. Maybe try a light simple texture. The font to me looks a bit tacky. Try to cut out your images a bit smoother so they don't look choppy. But I must say you really improved from the last one. Nice job. 
Agreed. Except the part about the last one, because I didn't see that. But yea the texture looks too grungy, and it makes the images look horrible quality too. The girl on the right (huge one) is really choppy. But not bad.
staticpose
Aug 8 2006, 07:25 PM
thanks all of you

and yeah i just looked at it and realized how little i spent cutting that image out O_O
PrincessAda
Aug 8 2006, 10:54 PM
I think you should overlap them more.Other than that,I like.
turbulent
Aug 9 2006, 09:20 AM
^yeah, since there is a lot of empty space in the bg. I'm personally not a big fan of repeating images >< Also, when half of a person's body is cut off, don't cover it with astrip of color. Instead put another picture on top of the half that's missing. Also (from experience) I find that collages are hard to do when you have a lot of space to fill up (with a large canvas..) so it's easier when you start off wth.. about 700x300px or so
digital.fragrance
Aug 9 2006, 09:38 AM
OMgosh she's so pretty!
Anyway, I love the pink pattern in the back, and great improvement from last time!
It looks like everyone else covered anything I'd like to say.. it'd be stupid to type it again
zebzie
Aug 10 2006, 12:44 AM
I think you should start by saving .jpeg or .png instead of .gif.
Good improvment, just put the cutouts closer together.\ and use a less grungy texture
verbalistic
Aug 10 2006, 10:22 PM
Keep practicing, but you did improve from your first try.
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