I guess you could call these poems... I have no talent, lol. Oh well, here ya go.
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I am war,
I am pain,
I am all you couldn’t slay,
I am sorrow from the fight,
I am the fear in the night.
I am the tear in your eye,
I am the pain in your heart,
I am the end of the start.
I am all this despair that you’ve felt,
I am the sin that causes you guilt.
I am the dream that’s out of reach.
I am the person, you couldn’t be.
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I can feel all this pain.
I can feel this distain and betrayal.
I can feel all of these dreams out of reach.
I can feel it all crashing down on me.
I can feel the weight breaking me.
Everything that I have ever cared for,
Everything that I have ever loved,
It all seems to slip away.
Yet all of this pain and despair,
It all seems to stay.
Its like all of this is not real.
Its as if it’s a dream.
I don’t want to be.
I don’t want to feel.
All I want is to wake up…
Awake from this unreal dream.
Full Version: My two poems
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I am war,
I am pain,
I am all you couldn’t slay,
I am sorrow from the fight,
I am the fear in the night.
I am the tear in your eye,
I am the pain in your heart,
I am the end of the start.
I am all this despair that you’ve felt,
I am the sin that causes you guilt.
I am the dream that’s out of reach.
I am the person, you couldn’t be.
I am pain,
I am all you couldn’t slay,
I am sorrow from the fight,
I am the fear in the night.
I am the tear in your eye,
I am the pain in your heart,
I am the end of the start.
I am all this despair that you’ve felt,
I am the sin that causes you guilt.
I am the dream that’s out of reach.
I am the person, you couldn’t be.
you appearently like Dimmu too.
Ya, I stole the first two lines from that song. Thats all though... I think. lol
oo a jocker we got ourselves a 2 lined jocker thats your new name! o and yes nice poems there!
o and yes nice poems there!
*Applause* Yay! Woo! Go Jordan! *Puts on cheerleader outfit and cheers Jordan on*
This poetry just inspired me to type from memory William Ernest Henley's poem, Invictus. Very inspirational I think. Especially with Thrones and Patriots or Red Army Chorus Music :).
Out of the night that covers me,
Black as pitch from pole to pole,
I thank whatever Gods may be,
For my unconquerable soul.
In the fell clutch of circumstance,
I have not winced nor cried aloud,
Under the bludgeoning of chance,
My head is bloody but unbowed.
Beyond this place of wrath and tears,
Looms but the horror of the shade,
And yet the menace of these years,
Finds and shall find me unafraid.
It matters not how straight the gate,
How charged with punishment the scroll,
I am the master of my fate,
I am the captain of my soul.
Out of the night that covers me,
Black as pitch from pole to pole,
I thank whatever Gods may be,
For my unconquerable soul.
In the fell clutch of circumstance,
I have not winced nor cried aloud,
Under the bludgeoning of chance,
My head is bloody but unbowed.
Beyond this place of wrath and tears,
Looms but the horror of the shade,
And yet the menace of these years,
Finds and shall find me unafraid.
It matters not how straight the gate,
How charged with punishment the scroll,
I am the master of my fate,
I am the captain of my soul.
wow. thats cool and it ryhmes. i cant get my poems to rhyme. its hard for me
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wow. thats cool and it ryhmes. i cant get my poems to rhyme. its hard for me
Hehe aww...don't say that. I'm sure it would work if you put your mind to it!
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