as the stars beam light onto the optic lense of mine
i peer across the plane to where the roses grow divine.
twards the sun they spurt. feasting on morning dew
they resemble me as i grow fond to you
drawing closer in persuit of your epiphany
i would sail in dreadful waters without cavelry
the signs on this oddysey warning me :wrong way!
but this heart of mine can't help it. i must disobey.

i just threw that together in a few minutes. how am i?

persuit - pursuit
cavelry - calvary

Other than that, sounds good to me, Lunchbox. I thought you didn't like to read, though. Did you ever read The Oddesey?

it sounds good to me, keep it up lunchbox!

yea i don't get it. i hate reading but i'm a great writer (not speller, though).

Oddysey* I spelled my own things wrong.

Eh...yeah, that is quite odd.

I think he means cavalry, as in horse soldiers, not calvary, as in Jesus's death.

actually it was, like, the cavalry like little destroyer ships following and circling a big cargo ship.

Either way, isn't it spelled "calvary"?

No, it's "Cavalry". Look it up if you don't believe me.

hehe yea u spelled some words long, but i guess it was ok... kinda didnt understand some of wat u were saying, but it was ok^^