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iminlovewithTomDelonge
Yeah, I don't title my poems... but I have like a whole hell of a lot of poems, but I really like this one... so here goes..

I know it's dumb
I thought it through
The fact that I still care for you

Undying Passion
can't you see?
I know you're not in love with me!

I love you still
My heart will keep
This feeling in myself so deep

I'll walk the path
You've made for me
'Cause to my heart you hold the key

Your words will hurt
They cut so quick
The pain inside will only stick.

Say what you want
It's all the same
Remember that it's not a game

It will kill me
Just you wait
And I will keep my story straight.

Yepp... that's all. :) I hope you all like it.
loopylandscapes47
hm.. I don't know if there's supposed to be a pattern, but there are some rhyming there.. :shrugg:
anyways, seems pretty good, but not very "professional" but it's good to write out your thoughts and feelings. keep writing ^^
iminlovewithTomDelonge
Yeah... it's the only poem I've ever written in ABB form... usually I write in ABCB hehe...
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