This is my poem i wrote for this girl i really like.
Everything
I wanna be...
I wanna see you smile
I wanna hold you
I wanna kiss you
I wanna be your everything
I wanna make you laugh
I wanna hear your soft voice sing
I wanna be your everything
I wanna be with you
I wanna hear you laugh
I wanna be there for when you cry and be your pillow to lean on
I wanna be your everything..
I wanna hear you say i love you
I wanna hear you say i need you
I wanna hear you say you are my everything
I just wanna be your everything
I wanna do all i can to see you happy
I wanna do all i can to hear you call me baby
I wanna be your everything

Aww =] Thats adorable! Im sure she will love it! Nice job.

That was cute :-)

Thanks ^___^

Good idea, but too many "I wanna"s.. Too repetitive.

Taylor``

I think the repetive part is what makes it stand out from the other poems. I think it is really sweet. I'm sure she will enjoy reading it.

Thank you taylor and underestimated****