xD her hair is suposed to be covering her eyes xD!

I love the coloring. Did you do it on the computer or by hand and then touched it up?

Nice drawing ^^ I love it when people draw fanfics!!

I like the face and all and how the body was drawn (though the shoulders could be a bit wider)..

and idk why but the eyes covered with hair thing D:

Cute! I like her necklace.

i like the face. nice drawing!

SEXY =O

I first thought she was pregnant. But no...my eyes are like not good right now ugh -_-;; STUPID BET UGH STUPID BET ARGGHH!!!

aw that is so cute! good job!

its really cute!, I like how her hair flows and her dress. =D

Pretty good. You've got a talent for drawing.

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT i would be soooo happy if i can draw like you lol

I hope its okay if I give you some constructive criticism....

Overall, its pretty good, but you definitley need to work on the lineart. Its way to sketchy, and makes the overall image look amateur (gomen, gomen!! I'm really trying to help!). You might want to buy some inking pens, that way, you're lineart will be black, but more professional looking.

Next- the shape of the hair looks kinda wierd. I suggest buying This -->How To Draw Manga

It helps a lot! It will also help you to improve your anatomy... which you desinitley need to work on. Oh, and the eyes.

I hope this helps!!! ^___^

Sorry for the harshness.... I didn't mean to be harsh... just trying to help!

It looks good, but you need to work on depth perception. The image looks very flat... I'm not saying it's bad, and I think you have some real talent. You should practice on putting things into perspective. Use rag dolls when you create a manga image. Using rage dolls, and practice wth rag dolls will allow you to produce more 3dimensional pictures and become better at drawing in general. Depth perception is very important when bringing your artwork to life. I'll give you an example and I'll tell you how to work on the illusion of 3d.

Image

Rag-doll


here is a manga that I'm working on...

-work on body preportions (there are some really good "How to Draw Manga" books for this)
-practice shading to give your characters depth
-Try drawing from different angles (Your picture is a 3/4's view)
-PRATICE RAG-DOLLS!!!!!! It may seem un-important, but I assure you... drawing a ruff sketch with a rag doll can meanthe difference between a good or bad preportions.'

You have great stuff, I think you have portential... don't think I'm wringing you out... I know my stuff isn't perfect, and I only want you to become better at drawing the things you like to draw.