With All My Heart

Cut me open and watch me die because of you
I loved you with all my heart and you knew
I'll bleed all over you as fast as an epidemic
I'll do that so much you'll hate living - you'll regret it

Tear me open and watch my heart beat for you
Listen, listen close because every breath is true
Racing through your mind evil and dark
I'll never stop, until I know I've made my mark
Paying for the crime you committed (and will probably do more)
I do them all a favor by making you suffer for
My blood is one with you; I'm in your head
Don't count on me leaving until you are dead

Rip my heart out and leave it for the world to see
I loved you every ounce; it was supposed to be
But since you don't feel the same and betray
You will rot forever i the depths of Hell to decay
No longer attached to something not there,
When it's you I see, it's for you I won't care
Love is a fragile bond that you viciously ended
All because you claim to love another I've befriended

Dang.. I'd seriously hate to be the person that poem's addressed to

Extremely powerful and well written, very emotional and dark, I love it

Haha...oh the ex-boyfriend I'll always have a grudge over.

Whoo, he's missing some good stuff!



By the way, I like the poem
It's poignant.

I wish I could write like that...

Wow ! Every new poem of yours I read, the more impressed I get!

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wow. that's some pretty good stuff. good talent ((=

Aww thanks, shortie.

it sounds like a song...or it could be made into a song..

and it would have all these dark sounds..

kathleen is sooooooo cool!

Actually, I did write it to music...hehe...I didn't think anyone would notice.

hahaha!

you thought you could OUTSMART me..?

silly rabbit..

wow that poem seems very strong i feel it!!! love it

whoa. anger laced with blood and vengeance, and no holding back. talk abt a poem with a blood hazed attached.

nice. i knew u could write...

Thanks. Oh haha I know I can write better than this. I wrote this a few years ago when my vocabulary was quite small.

wow, thats a really great poem. it would make the person feel all bad... and regretful.. if u gave it to me i would die of shock

Haha I don't think he's the type of person to feel bad after someone gave him a poem like that. Heck, I could probably pin it to his forhead, and he still wouldn't get it.

Very powerful. I love the last line and the statement it made.